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		<title>72.195.236.172: Created page with &quot;You&#039;ve locked this page, grammatical errors and all. It might be a good idea to have some editors review for grammar and style before locking the page down, eh?  For example, ...&quot;</title>
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;quot;You&amp;#039;ve locked this page, grammatical errors and all. It might be a good idea to have some editors review for grammar and style before locking the page down, eh?  For example, ...&amp;quot;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;You&amp;#039;ve locked this page, grammatical errors and all. It might be a good idea to have some editors review for grammar and style before locking the page down, eh?&lt;br /&gt;
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For example, the &amp;quot;Behavior&amp;quot; header does not follow the Canadian spelling standard. The first sentence in the Trampling section is a run-on, and the second is awkwardly worded. There are also issues with prepositions throughout the wiki page...&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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